tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post138141260447768405..comments2023-05-07T14:32:15.327+02:00Comments on Bastet's Waka Library: "A Dream Within A Dream" - Writing with Jen - November 5, 2014Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-85723761908556863002014-11-11T09:04:54.754+01:002014-11-11T09:04:54.754+01:00I love your haiku or open renga (I think, non?)......I love your haiku or open renga (I think, non?)...it is filled with such serenity and building to that last haiku...could be a quote for many to use, cara, beautiful!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15686112030059549498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-24299115420682774032014-11-11T05:38:18.429+01:002014-11-11T05:38:18.429+01:00I really was ... the poem was a great beginning po...I really was ... the poem was a great beginning point and full of things to meditate upon. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-57809241283482958672014-11-11T05:37:12.381+01:002014-11-11T05:37:12.381+01:00Thanks you Usha!Thanks you Usha!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-10528237101863139572014-11-11T04:27:40.372+01:002014-11-11T04:27:40.372+01:00A very nice "auto-renga" Georgia .... re...A very nice "auto-renga" Georgia .... really you were inspired on this post by Jen ... gorgeous response.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-44093648715584412042014-11-06T10:28:47.070+01:002014-11-06T10:28:47.070+01:00Beautiful depiction.Beautiful depiction.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06682758228934966786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-91083760529882684882014-11-06T09:19:38.776+01:002014-11-06T09:19:38.776+01:00Ah yes ... in the end we are alone when that momen...Ah yes ... in the end we are alone when that moment comes ... Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-45195382294188704302014-11-06T09:18:41.760+01:002014-11-06T09:18:41.760+01:00Yep ... Zen butterflies teach a lot of ways to fac...Yep ... Zen butterflies teach a lot of ways to face the illusion of life ... must admit Poe's:<br /><br /> " Is all that we see or seem<br />But a dream within a dream?"<br /><br />brought butterflies to mind ;-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-56661467049146841612014-11-06T09:16:41.522+01:002014-11-06T09:16:41.522+01:00Thanks Bjorn ... for the choice and the compliment...Thanks Bjorn ... for the choice and the compliment!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-89461555263833466712014-11-06T09:15:57.693+01:002014-11-06T09:15:57.693+01:00Thanks Hamish ... glad you enjoyed them both!Thanks Hamish ... glad you enjoyed them both!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-63598336268786523182014-11-06T09:15:31.423+01:002014-11-06T09:15:31.423+01:00Thank you Dolores ...Thank you Dolores ...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-9151142751988554982014-11-06T01:56:02.548+01:002014-11-06T01:56:02.548+01:00That slipping away feeling is one you captured - i...That slipping away feeling is one you captured - it is so lonely and helplessAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-48728689652120700462014-11-06T01:35:33.490+01:002014-11-06T01:35:33.490+01:00.... and very much like the butterfly dream, too, ....... and very much like the butterfly dream, too, right?<br />wonderful renga :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-11439028586061450712014-11-05T21:37:27.515+01:002014-11-05T21:37:27.515+01:00I especially like the last haiku here.. wonderful ...I especially like the last haiku here.. wonderful workbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-54214823767084179932014-11-05T18:54:18.297+01:002014-11-05T18:54:18.297+01:00Beautiful post. Gentleness is nice. Lovely haiku o...Beautiful post. Gentleness is nice. Lovely haiku on the other blog too.PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6448986794424732557.post-55022844356264879332014-11-05T09:47:39.790+01:002014-11-05T09:47:39.790+01:00Nicely written!Nicely written!Adas Alcovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18010269533190196240noreply@blogger.com