Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Thursday, September 11, 2014

Ghost Writer - September 11, 2014

This week's surprise Ghost Writer is Hamish Gunn of Cabin Fever on Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.  He adroitly analyzes a beautiful haiku composed by our host Chèvrefeuille and asks us to write a haiku or tanka about the tree of life ... here is my effort for today:





under the linden
cathedral colored canopy
the birds like angels
flitter from branch to branch
Riva's tree of life

G.s.k. '14


6 comments:

  1. What a beautiful tree...to see and hear the birds flitter like angels must be such an experience!

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    1. Thanks .. these trees are sotall and so beautiful and always full of birds ... it's an inspirational experience at times.

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  2. The linden flowers of spring... could it be more lively than that..

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    1. Yes .. in spring they are really beautiful! Thanks for mentioning them.

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  3. aloha Georgia. i particularly like the image you create with birds "flitter from branch to branch" —one of the experiences in a wooded area i enjoy a lot. in the canopy of that tree it would be a thrill to lay down and peer up for hours. way cool. aloha.

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    1. I agree in all senses .. the most enjoyable serene pass-time is laying under a tree watching the birds flitter about :-)

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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