Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Saturday, November 1, 2014

Movement - Haiku - November 1, 2014

This is the last haiku for Carpe Diem haiku Kai's Anniversary Month and it's dedicated to movement.



backward forward
never static never still
living creatures

the train passes
villages and fields - a blur
living movement

(c) G.s.k. '14


When I was studying Shiatsu one day the Master said: the only perfection is in death ... energy is always in movement from jistu so kyo from yin to yang ... if there is no movement, there is no life.


6 comments:

  1. Nicely done Georgia --- especially fond of the train haiku -- there's something about a train that makes it feel like a living creature ---

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    1. true .. trains work as great metaphors!

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  2. no movement
    stagnant
    the living dead
    :)

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    1. yipes ...

      words of warning
      swamp have movement
      a corpse doesn't

      :-)

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  3. I love this, and reminds me of my train rides from Toronto...I keep taking photos...can`t sleep, don`t want to miss anything.

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    1. I remember ... now it doesn't excite me as much as it did in the beginning .. we use the train much more here in Italy than in the Americas

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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