Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Saturday, December 20, 2014

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai's Tan Renga - Northern Lights - December 20, 2014

Credits: Aurora Borealis

curtain of light
shimmers in the winter cold
flight of fancy

© Dolores

Our Renga host in this episode of Tan Renga inspired by Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is:  Dolores with her response to Northern Lights.  Here is how our host completed the renga:

curtain of light
shimmers in the winter cold
flight of fancy
(© Dolores)

in the middle of the night
Mother Nature's light show
(© Chèvrefeuille)



My Attempt:


curtain of light
shimmers in the winter cold
flight of fancy

snowbirds in the evening frost
dream of warm city lights

©  G.s.k. '14


6 comments:

  1. Oh I love this completion...some day I hope to see that image you just showed...que c'est magnifique!

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    1. Thanks and I hope you may see it up close soon!

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  2. Yes... I like that.. I really think first of the snowbirds in the form of people living in the north.. it's probably time to go south...

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    1. I'm pretty sure the snowbirds are ready for migration :)

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  3. Love the direction you've taken -- very nice!

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    1. Thanks Jen ... there's only so much I can say about Northern Lights ... so I thought I'd think about what a snowbird would be thinking.

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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