Double Tan Renga - September 13, 2014

Today we have an interesting challenge at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai - Tan Renga!  Here's a fantastic haiga written by Björn Rudberg of Björn Rudberg's Writings for Carpe Diem's "Anti-Visual" Haiku:

 

evening mist
memories are fading
loon is calling

© Björn Rudberg

  

"The goal of Carpe Diem Tan Renga Squared is to write a second stanza to a given haiku (as we do in our Tan Renga Challenge) and a new 3-line stanza and 2-line stanza. So the goal is to write a short linked verse of four (4) stanzas.  To make it a little bit more difficult I love to see that your last stanza (2 lines) has a association with the first stanza by Björn. Well ... good luck."

as misty fall approaches
shadows in the corridor

reflections on ice
frozen spring-time memories
walking through the past

in the evening autumn mist
a nursery rhyme recited

© G.s.k. '14