This is the second day of the vision quest posts on Carpe Diem Haiku Kai:
next to my footprint
the empty shell of a hermit crab -
Ah! what a sadness(c) Chèvrefeuille (2012)
seeing empty shells
abandoned along the shoreline
sigh .. swallows gone south
sigh .. swallows gone south
(c) G.s.k. '14
Too soon, too soon!
ReplyDeleteI feel the sadness too.
Alas ... here summer never really came at all ... might as well been living on the British Isles!
DeleteOh dear. :(
Deleteso soon:( lovely haiku, Georgia.
ReplyDeleteSigh .... I know ... of course your winter is a real winter ... I shouldn't complain.
Deletelovely nature haiku ~ love the line...'swallows gone south' ~ happy week to you!
ReplyDeleteartmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)
Glad you enjoyed the ku! Thanks for dropping by :-)
DeleteA wonderful response .... gives me a feeling of departing ... that's also the feeling which was my major feeling as I wrote my haiku.
ReplyDeleteeach end of a cycle is a departure I suppose ... or so it feels to me.
DeleteEnd of summer.. yes that's sad
ReplyDeleteOf course ... we still have the autumn ... which is a wonderful season! :-)
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