Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Wednesday, August 27, 2014

Vision Quest #2 - An empty shell - August 27, 2014



This is the second day of the vision quest posts on Carpe Diem Haiku Kai:

next to my footprint

the empty shell of a hermit crab -
Ah! what a sadness
(c) Chèvrefeuille (2012)


seeing empty shells
abandoned along the shoreline
sigh .. swallows gone south

(c) G.s.k. '14


11 comments:

  1. Too soon, too soon!
    I feel the sadness too.

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    1. Alas ... here summer never really came at all ... might as well been living on the British Isles!

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    1. Sigh .... I know ... of course your winter is a real winter ... I shouldn't complain.

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  3. lovely nature haiku ~ love the line...'swallows gone south' ~ happy week to you!

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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    1. Glad you enjoyed the ku! Thanks for dropping by :-)

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  4. A wonderful response .... gives me a feeling of departing ... that's also the feeling which was my major feeling as I wrote my haiku.

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    1. each end of a cycle is a departure I suppose ... or so it feels to me.

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    1. Of course ... we still have the autumn ... which is a wonderful season! :-)

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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