Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Thursday, August 28, 2014

Vision Quest #3 - Deep Silence - August 28, 2014



For Capre Diem Haiku Kai's Vision Quest number three ...

evening walk

the sound of a wind chime
deep silence

© Chèvrefeuille 

inside the lost soul
gagged by honored traditions
deep is the silence

© G.s.k. '14

 
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8 comments:

  1. kaykualaAugust 28, 2014 at 5:03 PM

    Lost souls need a lot of understanding from those around them! Nicely Georgia!

    Hank

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  2. brudbergAugust 28, 2014 at 8:48 PM

    How often traditions can muffle ourselves.. not a very comforting silencce

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    1. Bastet's Waka LibraryAugust 29, 2014 at 4:59 AM

      You're right, I think it is a very uncomfortable silence indeed.

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  3. AnonymousAugust 28, 2014 at 11:00 PM

    "gagged by honored traditions" is a stunning line, Georgia -- WOW.

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  4. AnonymousAugust 28, 2014 at 11:21 PM

    A drape of sadness --
    For many, tradition can be binding unless the perspective of it changes.

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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