Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Thursday, August 28, 2014

Vision Quest #3 - Deep Silence - August 28, 2014



For Capre Diem Haiku Kai's Vision Quest number three ...

evening walk

the sound of a wind chime
deep silence

© Chèvrefeuille 

inside the lost soul
gagged by honored traditions
deep is the silence

© G.s.k. '14

 

8 comments:

  1. Lost souls need a lot of understanding from those around them! Nicely Georgia!

    Hank

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    1. I suppose they do .... Thanks for your comment Hank.

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  2. How often traditions can muffle ourselves.. not a very comforting silencce

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    1. You're right, I think it is a very uncomfortable silence indeed.

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  3. "gagged by honored traditions" is a stunning line, Georgia -- WOW.

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  4. A drape of sadness --
    For many, tradition can be binding unless the perspective of it changes.

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    1. True and bonds are never good for growth I think ...

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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