Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Saturday, August 23, 2014

Writing with Jim Kacian - "City Morning" - August 23, 2014


http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.it/2014/08/carpe-diem-special-103-jim-kacians-city.html

city morning
a crane lifts its shadow
up the wall


© Jim Kacian

after a night's sleep
the dawn of a new day -
sounds of traffic

© Chèvrefeuille

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night traffic
the city never sleeps
first rays of dawn 

early morning
factory workers changing shifts
city awakens

in the morning
vibrations of the metro
the city's heart beat

 ©  G.s.k. '14

12 comments:

  1. Love the DC Metro and its orange, beating heart :)
    Great series Georgia!

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    1. Which I don't see very often anymore ... but the memories are still fresh ;-)

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  3. Lovely images, Georgia...that last haiku is just superb...city heartbeath! wow!

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    1. Thanks Cher ... would love to hear the heartbeat of your city! ;-)

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  4. I love riding metros, and I'm glad you compared them to heartbeats...

    San Miguel Morning

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    1. Thanks ... I like them too! Glad you enjoyed the metaphor! :-)

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  5. Nice set of the citing coming alive.

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    1. Thanks - glad you liked the series :-)

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    1. True and like people each city has its own personality.

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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