Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Dawn at the Station (Haiga) - September 17, 2014

I decided to add another haiga to this week's Haiku Horizon ...



dawn at the station
first train pulling in at six
left without me

(c) G.s.k. '14



Inspired by the prompt at

6 comments:

  1. The complete opposite of your other train haiga -- so bleak!
    Still -- a great haiga :)

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  2. It's beautifully written. Loved it! :)

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  3. To be left behind is something that we all dread, I think.

    Train for All Seasons

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    1. A possible interpretation of course ... I was just reflecting on my present mood of wanting to take a trip.

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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