Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Dawn at the Station (Haiga) - September 17, 2014

I decided to add another haiga to this week's Haiku Horizon ...

 


dawn at the station
first train pulling in at six
left without me

(c) G.s.k. '14



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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2014 at 9:25 PM

    The complete opposite of your other train haiga -- so bleak!
    Still -- a great haiga :)

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  2. Balqis DBJSeptember 18, 2014 at 1:38 PM

    It's beautifully written. Loved it! :)

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 19, 2014 at 10:47 PM

    To be left behind is something that we all dread, I think.

    Train for All Seasons

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    1. Bastet's Waka LibrarySeptember 20, 2014 at 12:04 PM

      A possible interpretation of course ... I was just reflecting on my present mood of wanting to take a trip.

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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