power-driven fowl
in rays of a setting sun
flies home
© Oliana
in rays of a setting sun
flies home
© Oliana
This week's Tan Renga Challenge is provided by Oliana of Traces of the Soul. She wrote this haiku (the first stanza of the Tan Renga, also known as "hokku") in response on our "Sparkling Stars" episode of last Saturday (Oct. 4th). I think this haiku by Oliana can be very inspirational to make a Tan Renga with.
power-driven fowl
in rays of a setting sun
flies home
© Oliana
in rays of a setting sun
flies home
© Oliana
with happy snow birds
seeking their winter's nest
seeking their winter's nest
© G.s.k. '14
This turned out very charming. It's a lovely capping verse. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks ... glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteLovely, Georgia...a nest filled with white, blue and grey:)
ReplyDelete;-) thanks Oliana both for the comment and the great hokku!
DeleteHappy snow birds getting out of the cold! :D
ReplyDeleteMind of course was wishful thinking ... :-D
DeleteI like this end too!!
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it!
DeleteBeautiful continuation Georgia ... thanks!
ReplyDeleteThanks to you for choosing such a lovely haiku ... for me it was a pleasure!
DeleteThis tan renga makes me smile :)
ReplyDeletei'm always happy to make people smile ... a great compliment!
DeleteSnow birds are not part of my repertoire.Although we do have snow areas here so there must be snow birds. Must research that. Nice completion.
ReplyDeleteI came across the term snow birds from my sister who at one time lived in Arizona .. they are people who live in places that get very cold in the winter (like Quebec) and change their residence in the winter to a warmer place (like Florida).
DeleteLast winter I felt sorry for the birds - they hadn't gone far enough south.
ReplyDeleteFortunately our winter was not really terribly cold ... but these snow birds are of the human sort.
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