cold autumn dawn
lit window among the trees
- more drizzling rain
black cat in the leaves
shakes its wet paw in disgust
- leaving for work
country living
seasonal brands for each day
- persimmons rotting
seasonal brands for each day
- persimmons rotting
© G.s.k. '14
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And here are some examples of Richard Wright's haiku:
The chill autumn dusk
Grows colder as yellow lights
Come on in skyscrapers.
© Richard Wright
Autumn moonlight is
Deepening the emptiness
Of a country road.
© Richard Wright
As the popcorn man
Is closing up his wagon,
Snow begins to fall.
© Richard Wright
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And our hostess' haiku:
The first autumn snow
gleams blue on the parking lot
under the moonlight.
Next to the gutter
the raked-up pile of leaves
huddles under snow.
© Paloma
I enjoyed your series ...It felt as if I was your shadow...the second one make me smile:) that photo looks like a painting,Georgia...just exquisite!!
ReplyDeleteThanks ... I liked that effect on the photo very much .. glad you enjoyed the ku too and was happy that you were my shadow ;-)
DeleteI especially enjoyed the finely observed black cat haiku - how often I've seen that disgusted shake of a paw, followed by a little skip away from the cause of the offence :) And you're right, they do head out the door with a curiously business-like attitude at times. I do wonder why...
ReplyDeleteThanks Blake ... I love cats .. which probably explains my nom de plume ;-) I'm very glad you enjoyed the haiku :-)
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