Arco (TN)

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Friday, December 12, 2014

Tan Renga - Brigitta's Frozen Thoughts - December 12, 2014

This week's Tan Renga will be built on Brigitta from Birgitta of Crazy Art Photo & Poetry written for the first prompt of December "accepting the finite":

 Frozen thoughts
remember eclipse
not sunlight

© Birgitta

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This is our host's renga:


Frozen thoughts
remember eclipse
not sunlight 

(© Birgitta)


in silent adoration
whispering Om Mani Padme Hum
 © Chèvrefeuille)

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This is hard to follow but I'll give it a go!

Frozen thoughts
remember eclipse
not sunlight
© Birgitta

afternoon stars shine
filling the world with awe

© G.s.k. '14


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9 comments:

  1. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 12, 2014 at 8:33 PM

    I like your continuation ... those afternoon stars are a joy ...

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    1. Bastet's Waka LibraryDecember 13, 2014 at 8:55 AM

      Thanks Kristjaan... the eclipse made me think of afternoon stars :-)

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  2. brudbergDecember 12, 2014 at 8:59 PM

    Oh I would love to see those constellation of consolation...

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  3. UnknownDecember 12, 2014 at 11:32 PM

    this is beautiful, cara, midafternoon stars!!

    such wonders
    heavenly ornaments
    céleste du jour

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    1. Bastet's Waka LibraryDecember 13, 2014 at 9:01 AM

      Grazie!

      hiding the sun
      a gift from the moon
      céleste du jour

      a splendid summer day
      for a few moments night

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  4. AnonymousDecember 13, 2014 at 4:03 AM

    A tough one - but I'm feeling that awe :)

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  5. B i r g i t t aDecember 13, 2014 at 3:24 PM

    Great lines Georgia!

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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