moon in the heavens
climbs over the baita*
frosty morning
climbs over the baita*
frosty morning
© G.s.k. ‘14
Here is a haiku-example by Jane Reichhold:
mountain cabin
a wedge of winter sunlight
pushes in the doorway
© Jane Reichhold
And our host from Carpe Diem Haiku Kai:
thin mountain air
surrounds this old mountain cabin -
I hear the stream
© Chèvrefeuille
baita* is Italian for mountain cabin
Linked to: Ronovan Writes for the prompt words Climb&Heavens and Carpe Diem Haiku Kai for mountain cabin
Okay, this is the second one, right? I like this too --- the frosted glass is lovely :)
ReplyDeleteYes ... I did three ... this one actually had the prompt words in it, but I'd already published at the library ...
DeleteVery nice indeed - and I learnt a new word for cabin....
ReplyDeleteGlad you learned a new word ... thanks for passing by!
DeleteNice balance between heaven and earth.
ReplyDeleteAnd I like mixed language poetry
thanks Girl Friday ... lovely feedback!
Deletebaita.. Oh I like that
ReplyDeleteIt was so much easier than saying mountain cabin ;-)
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