Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Thursday, September 25, 2014

Haiku Heights - Space - September 25, 2014




that empty space
between the prison bars
the fly's freedom

shadows without light
space without color
darkness

a happy couple
walking down the road of  life
sharing their space

10 comments:

  1. The first two are good...a little dark because of Autumn melancholia I suspect. The happy couple one is more Spring like. Loovlay !

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    1. Yes ... I suspect you're right about Autumn melancholia ... I found this prompt harder than I'd expected.

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  2. Wonderful abstract art in your photo!
    And you have three wonderful interpretations of space .... I really think your first is the strongest though - it really grabs the reader. :)

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    1. I was tempted to stop there (in fact, I was tempted to pass over this prompt all together) ... and maybe I should have. This is an old photo of a grate (you know the ones you find in sidewalks) that I jazzed up for the occasion. :-)

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    2. Glad you didn't. I like it very much. :)

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  3. Sharing space is a delicate balancing act, is it not?

    Desolate Space

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  4. I like these, nice perspectives:)- 'the fly's freedom' is my favorite.

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    1. Thanks ... I was trying to get a different take on space ... :-)

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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