From the November 2013 Tan Renga reprise:
Logo Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Month November 2013
Becca Givens wrote the haiku which will inspire us today!
river stones
caressed by flowing water
pale moon shines
(Becca Givens)
caressed by flowing water
pale moon shines
(Becca Givens)
tiny islands in the stream
inviting dreams of travel
inviting dreams of travel
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in the autumn morn
stones crested with white water
- sweet river song
- sweet river song
Sweet river song....what a nice haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks Hamish ... I do so love rivers, lakes and streams ... happy you liked the haiku!
DeleteI like the bubbling white water over the rocks singing the river song. A beautiful evocation.
ReplyDeleteThanks you very much Rallentanda ... I'm happy you heard the river sing ;-)
DeleteI'm enjoying the music of this piece!
ReplyDeleteRiver Stones
Happy MMT that you're enjoyed the music!
DeleteBeautiful Georgia :)
ReplyDeleteThanks jen ... it was a quick write so i'm happy you felt it was also a beautiful write :-)
DeleteOh my ! I don`t know which I like best, that completion is so beautiful...and your haiku, Ilove each line...I imagine the white water at la rivère Richelieu, at the rapids where I would go so often to refuel or just vent...maybe after the river swallowed my tears, it transformed into a river song:) Just love this!!
ReplyDeleteRivers and streams mean so much to me ... I could pass hours watching the water passing by .. I can identify with what you've said here ... thanks for sharing Cheryl-Lynn!
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