Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Thursday, January 22, 2015

Writing with Sogi - January 22, 2015

reflecting on life
this temporary home
before eternity

winter rain
sheltering in this car
looking back
reflecting on life's joys
reflecting on life's sorrows

© G.s.k. ‘15

yo ni furu mo sara ni shigure no yadori kana

life in this world
just like a temporary shelter
from a winter shower

© Iio Sogi (1424-1502)

in just one heart beat
the sunlight breaks through the mist
revealing the meadow

© Chèvrefeuille

Carpe Diem Haiku Special

1 comment:

  1. Very definitely in the spirit of Sogi -- and the repetition works well here too. Nicely done!


harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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