an autumnal walk
reflecting on springs gone by
- blackbirds always sing
reflecting on springs gone by
- blackbirds always sing
don't reflect on tomorrows
life's an ephemeral dream
life is illusion
as the noble Buddha says -
t'is a dream we dream
illusions in illusions
tomorrows in yesterdays
sand in an hour glass
each grain a second of life
- slipping quickly by
each grain a second of life
- slipping quickly by
(c) G.s.k. '14
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Today's Ghost Writer at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is Jen from Blog it or Lose It!
Jen gives us a brief introduction to one of my favorite writers Edgar Allen Poe ... here is the poem which she put on her post for today's challenge and inspiration:
A DREAM WITHIN A DREAM.Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow—You are not wrong, who deemThat my days have been a dream;Yet if hope has flown awayIn a night, or in a day,In a vision, or in none,Is it therefore the less gone?All that we see or seemIs but a dream within a dream.I stand amid the roarOf a surf-tormented shore,And I hold within my handGrains of the golden sand—How few! yet how they creepThrough my fingers to the deep,While I weep—while I weep!O God! can I not graspThem with a tighter clasp?O God! can I not saveOne from the pitiless wave?Is all that we see or seemBut a dream within a dream?
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Nicely written!
ReplyDeleteThank you Dolores ...
DeleteBeautiful post. Gentleness is nice. Lovely haiku on the other blog too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Hamish ... glad you enjoyed them both!
DeleteI especially like the last haiku here.. wonderful work
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn ... for the choice and the compliment!
Delete.... and very much like the butterfly dream, too, right?
ReplyDeletewonderful renga :)
Yep ... Zen butterflies teach a lot of ways to face the illusion of life ... must admit Poe's:
Delete" Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?"
brought butterflies to mind ;-)
That slipping away feeling is one you captured - it is so lonely and helpless
ReplyDeleteAh yes ... in the end we are alone when that moment comes ...
DeleteBeautiful depiction.
ReplyDeleteThanks you Usha!
DeleteA very nice "auto-renga" Georgia .... really you were inspired on this post by Jen ... gorgeous response.
ReplyDeleteI really was ... the poem was a great beginning point and full of things to meditate upon.
DeleteI love your haiku or open renga (I think, non?)...it is filled with such serenity and building to that last haiku...could be a quote for many to use, cara, beautiful!!
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