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Wednesday, November 5, 2014

"A Dream Within A Dream" - Writing with Jen - November 5, 2014


an autumnal walk
reflecting on springs gone by
- blackbirds always sing

don't reflect on tomorrows
life's an ephemeral dream

life is illusion
as the noble Buddha says -
t'is a dream we dream

illusions in illusions
tomorrows in yesterdays

sand in an hour glass
each grain a second of life
- slipping quickly by


(c) G.s.k. '14


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Today's Ghost Writer at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is Jen from Blog it or Lose It!
Jen gives us a brief introduction to one of my favorite writers Edgar Allen Poe ... here is the poem which she put on her post for today's challenge and inspiration:

            A DREAM WITHIN A DREAM.

Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow—
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.

I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand—
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep—while I weep!
O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?
 


15 comments:

  1. Beautiful post. Gentleness is nice. Lovely haiku on the other blog too.

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  2. I especially like the last haiku here.. wonderful work

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  3. .... and very much like the butterfly dream, too, right?
    wonderful renga :)

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    1. Yep ... Zen butterflies teach a lot of ways to face the illusion of life ... must admit Poe's:

      " Is all that we see or seem
      But a dream within a dream?"

      brought butterflies to mind ;-)

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  4. That slipping away feeling is one you captured - it is so lonely and helpless

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    1. Ah yes ... in the end we are alone when that moment comes ...

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  5. A very nice "auto-renga" Georgia .... really you were inspired on this post by Jen ... gorgeous response.

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    1. I really was ... the poem was a great beginning point and full of things to meditate upon.

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  6. I love your haiku or open renga (I think, non?)...it is filled with such serenity and building to that last haiku...could be a quote for many to use, cara, beautiful!!

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harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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