Arco (TN)

Arco (TN)

Wednesday, December 17, 2014

Carpe Diem Haiku Special - Richard Wright - December 17, 2014

I give permission

                                                                                              I give permission
                                                                                              the late winter sun shines
                                                                                              rain clouds draw near

I give permission                                                                     for this slow spring rain to soak
For this slow spring rain to soak                                              renewing life
The violet beds.                                                                      soon blossoms open

© Richard Wright

                                                                                              the violet beds
                                                                                              greet the early morning sun
                                                                                              wrinkled pajamas

                                                                                                © G.s.k. '14


  1. I really love the violet beds / wrinkled pajamas -- to me, it could be read as either the violets in wrinkled pajamas or the author in wrinkled pajamas -- love the ambiguity :)

  2. Thanks Jen ... and darn i just saw the typos ... sigh. Glad you liked the last verse! I loved the wrinkled pjs myself. :-)

  3. Jen beat me to the punch with her appreciation of the wryly descriptive "wrinkled pajamas" - but there's no harm in agreeing with someone if she's right, right? ;)

    1. No problem by me ... loved that image myself!


harmonious words ... like crystal clear water ... pure ectasy

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