autumn moon
soft veils enhance
her beauty
(c) G.s.k. '14
soft veils enhance
her beauty
(c) G.s.k. '14
(For all those not Italian, the moon is considered feminine.)
"A gorgeous haiku, if I may say. There are at least two senses present in this one, hearing and seeing, it's a short moment in time, there is a kigo in it and the original counts 17 Onji ... so it's a haiku following the classical rules. Gorgeous ... "
© Chèvrefeuille
meigetsu ya ike o megurite yo mo sugarathe night deepens
the autumn full moon:
all night long
I paced round the lake.
© Basho